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=alone-maggie Jun 19, 2009, 12:34:55 PM
I must admit that you have some unique deviations in your gallery and when I saw this one, I was a little bit disappointed with it.
I don't know what your aim was, but for me this photo looks definitely too soft. And, what is more, you didn't focus on the main object which is the flower petals. In fact, I don't see the sharpness even, or am I blind?

In short, this piece would be much more interesting if there was the sharpness. I just love the composition and I love the forget-me-not as well! :)

So...
Vision 4/5
Originality 3/5 - unfortunately, there are many such similiar photos already on deviantart, so I can give you only 3 for originality
Technique 2/5 - sharpness!!!
Impact 3/5 - the first impression was quite nice.

(Sorry for my English but I'm not a native English speaker so if you don't understand something, let me know :) ).
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:iconmetalfire77:
~Metalfire77 Jun 19, 2009, 7:09:53 PM
lol, yes i totally agree with you, for me it's just a piece of shit...
It's a kind of experiment, Seeing some of my best shots don't have any visits or comments, i was thinking than mostly visitors on deviantArt just liked shit, unfortunately the result seems to confirm my thoughts, it's one of the best success of my gallery, that make me very desapointed :(
:iconalone-maggie:
=alone-maggie Jun 23, 2009, 12:20:22 AM
But there are some amazing photos - macro shots which you took. So maybe try to promote those deviations you are proud of? :)

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~Metalfire77 Jun 23, 2009, 1:08:50 AM
thanks, i've been trying for a long time, i'm begining to think it's impossible for a french to have succes on DeviantArt.
:iconalone-maggie:
=alone-maggie Jun 23, 2009, 4:03:36 AM
No, that's not true! There are many talented artists here, from all over the world, also from France. Maybe take part in contests? You have a big chance to win because your photos deserve much attention :)

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~Metalfire77 Jun 23, 2009, 6:29:16 AM
Thanks, but i don't speak english well enough to participate in the forum, i don't even know what is a contest.
I just think there are too many people on DA to permit to an unknown artist to be noticed just by posting good art, it was probably more simple at the begining when members were very fewer.
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=alone-maggie Jun 23, 2009, 9:26:57 AM
Nooo.... I don't agree with you. Contest is a competition - there are many contests on dA. Just find some contest, take a photo of the subject which is required, and I promise you that you will be noticed better. :)

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:sun:If you watch me, you are featured!
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~Metalfire77 Jun 23, 2009, 9:46:31 AM
ok, i'm going to try.
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