I found this photo in "Critiqueable" section and it drew my attention. The first impression was perfect!
It's difficult to say whether I like it or not. Hmm, let me start from the minuses of this deviation: - sharpness! or rather the lack of sharpness here. The main object (flower) isn't sharp at all... Your camera caught the focus on the stalk, and I suppose it wasn't your aim. - the background - it's good that at least you didn't focus on it but these curves should be straight and horizontal. In my opinion they spoil this photo a bit...
I like: - the object, because it's rather an original idea to take a photo of such flower - colours - you didn't saturated them too much and they are "balanced" - the composition of this deviation (a flower in the middle of the photo would look not not interesting)
If I can advise you something, take sharpness into account. This photo would be much better if you focused on the flower, not on the stalk.
(Sorry for my English but I'm not a native English speaker, so if you don't understand the way I typed, just ask )
It's difficult to say whether I like it or not.
Hmm, let me start from the minuses of this deviation:
- sharpness! or rather the lack of sharpness here. The main object (flower) isn't sharp at all... Your camera caught the focus on the stalk, and I suppose it wasn't your aim.
- the background - it's good that at least you didn't focus on it but these curves should be straight and horizontal. In my opinion they spoil this photo a bit...
I like:
- the object, because it's rather an original idea to take a photo of such flower
- colours - you didn't saturated them too much and they are "balanced"
- the composition of this deviation (a flower in the middle of the photo would look not not interesting)
If I can advise you something, take sharpness into account. This photo would be much better if you focused on the flower, not on the stalk.
(Sorry for my English but I'm not a native English speaker, so if you don't understand the way I typed, just ask
Vision: 4/5
Originality: 4/5
Technique: 2/5 unfortunately!
Impact 2,5/5